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Week 8 Topic 1 Discussion

Week 8 Topic 1 Discussion

Q In this discussion, you will share your revision process. You will also give and receive feedback from your classmates. Initial Post (due by 11:59 p.m. on Friday) Reflect on your revision process and complete the following: • Share an area of your case study project that needs revision. This could be an area that you identified or that was identified by your instructor. • Discuss how you plan to make the necessary revisions--including how you plan to improve your grammar and the flow of your essay. Peer Responses (first peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Sunday; second peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Tuesday) Respond to your classmates and provide any insight or suggestions that you may have to help them with making revisions.

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Passage from the Draft: Language and communication are two basic concepts that help in effective interaction and understanding. Language is known as the basic system of communication and this depends on both the verbal and the non-verbal codes. Then again through communication messages are interchanged exchanged effectively. The exchange of data can take place between two or more people and the focus is mainly on the people who are involved in the informational exchange. Language is considered to be a communicative tool and it can help transfer messages from one person to the other another.